Free
I'd describe myself as free mainly because I'm independent and am willing to do a lot of things. Someone once told me that I was a free thinker. I have a free-wandering mind and I know I am free to think or say whatever I want to.
You are caged and trapped in a box
Your wings are clipped
You don't know what's out there
What you're missing
But I fly free
To my own rhythm
And my own beat.
I don't follow the current
Don't follow the pattern
I fly free
Do whatever I want
I am not repressed
I am not contained
I choose my path
I make decisions
I am in control of my life
My fate
My destiny
I am independent
And I am free.
posted by Sam @ 7:53 PM
2 comments
2 Comments:
I really liked the word you chose to describe yourself. I wish that I had chosen that word...
But...
I didn't. *shrug*
I also loved your poem. From the way you wrote the poem I would say that you tried not to put so many constraints on your poem. to make it sound more...
how do you say it?...
More free! *what a coincidence!*
I really liked your poem!
*Two thumbs UP!*
Sam,
Great Work! I liked the word you chose and, like Danny above me, wish that I had chosen it. The poem was great, and free-flowing. It was all very great work.
I do have some suggestions though...
I think that you should have made your explanation on your word a little longer and more detailed. Instead of telling us what made you choose it, tells us why you chose it. Other than that good job.
Excellent Work! :)
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