Where I'm Going, I Don't Care
I stand here, with no thought in my head
Of where I'll go, nor where I have been
No destination planned, no home said
Perhaps I'll live; perhaps I'll be dead
No place here for the Yang and the Yin.
To the right, tracks, as far as I see
To the left, more train tracks, stretching out
All around, birds are singing in glee,
Where I go, none accompanies me
Happiness my destination's without.
At last, the train comes; my time to go
Don't know what I'll find when I get there,
Yes, where I'm going, I do not know
Yes, and the winds will forever blow
And yes, where I'm going, I don't care.
posted by Sam @ 10:52 AM
2 comments
2 Comments:
Sam,
Uhh...someone on my cohort didn't post their homework so I'll be posting on yours.
Well first off, that was a great poem and I liked the meaning you were trying to show. It was pretty deep. I also like how you included a title to your poem, since the people I commented on didn't. It was cool how you took an important line from your poem and made it your title.
There were not many problems I could fined, although, I think you should have told us which authors style you are writing in. At the momment I believe that you didn't really write in the style of either of the poets. But anyways you did a great job!!!
Great Poem!!!
Sam,
Uhh...someone on my cohort didn't post their homework so I'll be posting on yours.
Well first off, that was a great poem and I liked the meaning you were trying to show. It was pretty deep. I also like how you included a title to your poem, since the people I commented on didn't. It was cool how you took an important line from your poem and made it your title.
There were not many problems I could fined, although, I think you should have told us which authors style you are writing in. At the momment I believe that you didn't really write in the style of either of the poets. But anyways you did a great job!!!
Great Poem!!!
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